Drum & Bass Heeaavyy darkstep sh$t guys : >

Discussion in 'New Talent & Track Reviews' started by `ry4ndnb, Feb 13, 2013.

  1. `ry4ndnb

    `ry4ndnb Member

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    I wasn`t here since weeks, now I`m coming with something hard :> It`s not finished, so comment and reply below!

     
  2. spyre

    spyre sample all the things

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    You need to layer that snare dude, make it well 'ard
     
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    "well 'ard"... ee?
     
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    I liked the borked countdown, fun :D and very evil at the end ! Afraid I lost the track after then but probably just as it's not my thing (?), I found the lead kinda overbearing (and too detuned maybe?). Think the drums do need to come up a bit, layering might help emphasise the main kick and snare as per sypre. Checked your soundcloud and quite like 'I'm not one of them' - much better imo! :)
     
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    Thanks for reply! That countdown is just called 'number stations' - this is some freaky radio auditions... For me, I haven`t heard any dark dnb tune with that voice sample, so I made one ;). The lead has to be distorted - sounds better IMO. Yeah, I`m 'fixing' the drums. Unfortunatelly, I have lost the .flp of 'I'm not one of them', sorry. Otherwise, I haven`t any idea for that track, so..
     
  6. spyre

    spyre sample all the things

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    Nice drums make everything nicer, i could send you some hits if you want?
     
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    Yeah, no problem, just drop it on PM ;)
     
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    Hi, I`ve finishedtrack today, what do you think about it? :>
     
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    JimpaDirt Vettvilling

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    Alot of crazy sounds but evrything is clashing together into a big mess. The lead sounds cool but its too much shit going on and the detuning as laiisen said, is making it sound like the notes are not fitting.

    My tip to you is to get more into EQing and trying to make sure that every sound sits in its place.
     
  10. Mr_DnB

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    Wow crazy track mate :smash:

    To my mind the drums need a lot of improvement. E.g. the kick has to be much harder ;) . Also this high hat notes are a bit annoying after a time ;)

    Dude, cool german samples at the end xD (I am from austria ;) )

    Hope that helps ;)
     
  11. Neomind

    Neomind Too many skulls!">:O

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    The drum hits are just PERFECT but you gotta work on the mixdown and on how things will sit in the mix (the less the better).

    Keep on pushing on that direction and don't hesitate on PM me for feedback!
     
  12. `ry4ndnb

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    wow, I see some constructive criticism out here! :) It`s very nice from you guys, it helps me a lot. Thanks for advices ;)