have a sniff at this guvna

[Toejam]

I was a bored and was noodlin about with some acapella and done this this little ditty but i think it needs a little something but cant work it out?

any ideas ??

I havent finished with the beat and i havent eq'ed it so it might sound a bit cack but you will get the jist

its not my usual style dnb but ill give anything a go