i like it mate, good sounds, i can tell what your aiming for which is nice and dark ... i can offer much constructive, the drums sound nice and metal , but need to be harder hitting , the bassline sound is actually fairly annoying ... but the genral feel is dark which is good .. needs to be sicker tho ..
im sure vickvega will offer some decent feedback at some point as his style is similar , try listen to his tracks , brilliant production and nice and dark .. not over the top dark .. just grind ya teeth dark ... dark dark dark .. maybe feedback on his tracks and he will do the same .... 'spect onslo