Fourstoriesdown
New Member
- Joined
- Apr 15, 2010
- Location
- Dartford/Kent
Basically, this is the stage i'm at:
Sojourner - http://soundcloud.com/fourstoriesdown/sojourner
Possibly need some vocals in order to keep it interesting in the first half?
This is at no real state to be called finished, but i don't know where to go with it so... I need some real criticism on where to take it, what to change etc. FEEDBACK!
Used: FL8, Ibanez GAX, Edirol ua3fx, KP3
Poetry sample: Eunoia by christian bok
If anyone wants to master this, be my guest!
Sojourner - http://soundcloud.com/fourstoriesdown/sojourner
Possibly need some vocals in order to keep it interesting in the first half?
This is at no real state to be called finished, but i don't know where to go with it so... I need some real criticism on where to take it, what to change etc. FEEDBACK!
Used: FL8, Ibanez GAX, Edirol ua3fx, KP3
Poetry sample: Eunoia by christian bok
If anyone wants to master this, be my guest!