Basically, this is the stage i'm at: Sojourner - http://soundcloud.com/fourstoriesdown/sojourner Possibly need some vocals in order to keep it interesting in the first half? This is at no real state to be called finished, but i don't know where to go with it so... I need some real criticism on where to take it, what to change etc. FEEDBACK! Used: FL8, Ibanez GAX, Edirol ua3fx, KP3 Poetry sample: Eunoia by christian bok If anyone wants to master this, be my guest!