half-time tune, need feedback on mixdown/master!

[IFTN]

the tune's just about finished, just looking to get a bit of feedback on the mixdown & master before i make it public

https://soundcloud.com/koashy/halftime-dnb-23th-oct/s-rkR3U

thanks in advance!

 

[IFTN]

bump!

 

[DjCartel]

from 26 secs i have no idea what the vocal is saying. i would probably just have it repeat the line "libery will never perish" just before the drop instead of having that other bit. in saying all this, that drop is hench, really really good, love that bass progression that comes in. not normally in to the half time stuff but this is large man

 

[MisterApe]

That bass is awesome, good work! : )

 

[Sovereign]

Sounds good so far, but I agree with DjCartel that after 26 seconds I have no idea what the vocal is saying anymore (maybe that's intentional) but maybe look into playing around with that.

 

[IFTN]

cheers guys! it's not *intentional* that you can't understand what the vocal says, but obviously all the FX and processing on it are intentional. wanted it all to get a bit hectic so that it sounds better when it clears up at the drop i'll have a play making it a bit less crazy though