hair - untitled (future Garage kinda)

Discussion in 'New Talent & Track Reviews' started by Callumstrange, Oct 15, 2012.

  1. Callumstrange

    Callumstrange Member

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    Hey everyone here's a track i finished a while ago but completely forgot about its not dnb but i thpught i'd share it anyway :)
    Favorite it on Soundcloud if you want it as a free download
     
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    Love the guitar in this, really good track. Id say give the kick more beef, and also the mid bass sound is really cool, id try and process it further or make it more 'engulfing'. Very cool ideas in this track tho really like the style.
     
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    thanks man im glad you like it. yeah im just starting to get my head around synths properly so i'll have a play around with it. Thanks again :)
     
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    IV4 Currently a newt.

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    It is very pretty. I enjoyed this a lot.
     
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    sounds great - at 1:27 you should bring in some strings and bring the part from 1:34 in and the guitar change, it should all happen there at once, with the lo passed buildup drums. then when it comes back in add some quicker elements in the drums, like swing (just a little) hi hats on the 8th notes maybe.

    i think this would really help! great potential in this track

    hope it made sense reading this
     
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    I like this a lot, the only thing I would like to change is maybe abit more volume/power to the mid bass (could also be my headphones).

    Well done anyway!
     
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    Thanks alot for the comments everyone im glad you guys all seem to like it :) and i'll have a play around with the arrangemnt a bit and try what you said @equlibrium :)