GRMM ft. Father Dude - 'Electrify' [Dappa.DnB RMX]

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  1. Dappa.DnB

    Dappa.DnB New Member

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    Another remix comp entry, took on board the great feedback I've had recently regarding mix downs etc so hopefully that shows, any feedback, likes or reposts appreciated. Big ups.
     
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    Dark Lizardro The Lizard that has a hammer Staff Member

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    Nice one, mate! I'd just lower this ride a little, I think it's competing too much with the vocals and some other elements on the track.
     
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    Big ups bro, I only really noticed that when you pointed it out, so I've gone back and re-worked the drums and made a few minor tweaks as well, sounds cleaner now and it's given it more breathing space (I have updated soundcloud). Thanks for the feedback!
     
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    I'm liking this... Vocals fits perfectly in this track
    Maybe something else for the second drop? Now it was exactly the same, maybe a small difference or something? I feel that a different second drop always give a track more... I don't know, just more :p
     
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    very cool and pretty tune!!
    cool beat and vocal :)
     
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    Dappa.DnB New Member

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    Thanks for the comments and feedback guys, much appreciated! :slayer:
     
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    Tasty feel. Yeah ofc, one may have a very nice tune idea-wise(and you do) but what distinguishes good from best is proper mixdown. Unfortunately, this here can´t be felt in my face. Perfect work at vocals, I would say if it was nicely mixed I would even add it to my favs. :)
     
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    Thanks for the comment, you're the first person to say you don't think it is a "proper" mixdown but I spent a fair bit of time making sure everything worked, especially after some feedback I had in the past, so I'm not sure what you feel let's it down in that respect, though I appreciate your opinion and glad you liked the idea :)
     
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    IV4 Currently a newt.

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    Your vocals and pinao are perfect and the kick and snare sounding good. I think your bass is lacking and the side chain movement bass sound is off a little bit. Other than that is sounds good to me.
     
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    Cheers mate, it's a lot more helpful when people let me know what they think needs improvement.