Well it is very crunchy. Its like a scary biker dude eating captain crunch with over exaggerated bites while playing pac man on his dirty iPad. Mix sounds good too. I feel like its missing something on the top end of the bass. I can not tell if it's the stereo field, or if it just needs some phasing or something.
I have my volume turned up pretty loud but I think it is a bit too filtered at the very beginning, maybe tone that down a notch
And I think the background voice could be a touch louder
Bassline is sick
Beginning section before the break is pretty good but starts to sound repetitive by the fourth section, maybe some variation would be nice either drums or bassline for a section