Gore - Wizard

Discussion in 'New Talent & Track Reviews' started by GoreDNB, May 15, 2010.

  1. GoreDNB

    GoreDNB New Member

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    Hey everone :)

    About me : Im a, well you could call me Producer i guess? lol, from Germany. Ive been creating Drum and Bass for about 2-3 Months now and never wanted to go "public" with it, cause i think its just a hobby and it also sounds bad compared to the drum and bass i listen to lol. But then Friends came over to my place and heard this and they said i should upload this and ask more people how they like it. I did that on youtube but, well i dont get that much views (about 30-40) so i decided to look up a forum and ask for their opinion.

    So im asking you guys how do you think it is and what can i improve?

    http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=jTzpVOhZOcY
    http://soundcloud.com/gorednb

    - sorry for the bad english, it might sound offensive, but i just want to share this and ask for opinios and tipps :)


    -gore-
     
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    GoreDNB New Member

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  3. 5IVE7EVEN9INE

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    mkay commented on your soundcloud, but beware i had smoked like 4 bowls, i was pretty faded :/
     
  4. co0ke

    co0ke windowlicker

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    sounds nice so far, like the melody and the vocal 'ooos'. think the transition into the drop works well but u could benefit with more sub in there when it does drop. if this is just 2-3 months then good for you man - respect!
     
  5. Zeal

    Zeal Ohm/C2D/Dark Asylum/Ennex

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    hi man welcome to the forum :)

    I can hear some good little ideas in ur two tunes on there man

    There isnt alot of weight behind the elements but they are pretty clean and well thought out really

    lacking in sub bass etc too

    Are you using monitors yet?

    Tbh for a couple of months working i rekon keep on it!
     
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    I've got to agree on the weight part, seriously needs more of it, the drums sounded pretty nice to me. The melody, and the sound of the synth sounds pretty nice as well.
    Keep it up.
    Ez
     
  7. erecsean

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    yes sub needs more weight.. drums sitting nicely though!