Good Times (Rework)

Discussion in 'New Talent & Track Reviews' started by ManuForti, Aug 5, 2010.

  1. ManuForti

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    ok so thanx for your comments..

    Sausage, Stiffer, Mizst and ARTFX

    Ive tried to do everything you said ie drums a bit boring, filter lead synth, and improve vocal

    heres the outcome

    http://soundcloud.com/jawgawn/good-times-rework

    Enjoy :cool:
     
  2. jimjimjim

    jimjimjim oldskool

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    hey thats nice - moody and tuff dude.
    its a little quiet tho (could be my speakers i guess) but i had to crank up the volume a fair bit
    Neways - nice one
     
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    its not your speakers im just noob lol

    thanx for listening
     
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    Lol
    Interesting track, but drums are weak maybe? idk
     
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    ARTFX www.artfx-studios.com

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    Okay it's better already, but I think the drums are still a bit boring, add some more breaks and different variations on this drumloop. That should work.
    Maybe fatten up the drums just a little bit more.
     
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    its getting there now!! still needs edits on the break, maybe add a different break at one point to change the swing/shuffle of the beat..

    but yeahits better than it was
     
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    im on it guys ill have another look over wknd. thanks for your feedback its really helping me see what im doing wrong.

    also i have no idea about the technical side of things its all trial n error but im begining to understand some of it now

    again cheers