GlaDOS-Shimmer

Discussion in 'Production' started by GlaDOS, Feb 25, 2010.

  1. GlaDOS

    GlaDOS New Member

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    hi this is my first dnb production, free download i would love to hear some feed back... the bass is kinda dirty sounding im not sure if it works well with all speaker types :D

    http://soundcloud.com/glados111/shimmer
     
  2. Indigo

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    maybe have some variationss within your bass instead of having one flat sound ,
    if that sound was a gun , it would be a lazer beam , no space in it and doesn't like the kicks at all

    you need to eq and layer the bass up , give it some depth add some filter modulation i dunno.

    and the sample your using really stands out and doesn't sound in key or on time.

    also the start of the track makes you turn up your speakers and scares you when it drops , a drop is nice when you expect it imo.

    take it or leave it bud , just advice
     
  3. GlaDOS

    GlaDOS New Member

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    :) thanks a lot for the speedy response mate, i think i might wait for a little more feed back and go back n try n beef up the bass and kick situation, the sample is just giving me problems. eh any way thanks for bringing my attention to that, anything else problematic?
     
  4. Indigo

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    if the sample is coursing problems , fuck it off , use it in another tune

    you need to remember that you cant polish a turd which everyone will say to you

    because if you did polish a turd you would get poo on your hands and you don't want that
     
  5. Cat Gas

    Cat Gas Aka Basis

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    It all seems a bit flat, especially the bass. EQ it
     
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    GlaDOS New Member

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    is this considered a turd so far? :( lol
     
  7. Indigo

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    anything that courses you problems is a turd , i didnt say the track was i said the sample , you can always find another in key