not my style at all, but, nicly put together i think theres somthing wrong with ur sub levels, although its hard to tell with such a low bit rate mp3, nice sound tho, if i liked this style i recon i'd like the track allot
Like the layed back intro, could do with a riff or pad with that vox tho. Basslines pretty good, but gets a bit repetative after a while. Feeling that 'yo' vox at the end of the loop
Drums need work dude, using a break in the fruity slicer will fill up all those gaps an toughen the drums up. Good effort tho