I liked that tune. Good melodies and atmosphere.
I didn't like the snare. The actual snare you've used is a quite splashy and quite light, which is one thing, nothing major, but I personally don't like to hear the same snare banging along unchanged for so long, with no fills, shuffles, ghost hits, filtering etc.
Something about that just annoys me. Just my personal taste.
But it's only one small point.
i like a good strong break which i didnt get from this. but i like the synth work man, very lurid and original. i like the slight change at 4:30 too. keep working into this one mate. its a good idea that needs some better execution.