Giles - One Step Forward, Two Steps Back

Discussion in 'New Talent & Track Reviews' started by Giles20, Sep 8, 2009.

  1. Giles20

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    I really like the sub bass here. Personally, I feel like the melody and some of the sounds that come in are a bit...i dunno....cheesy? A bit like they could be from zelda or something haha. Just my opinion though.... The ideas good, just think you need to work on making it sound a bit more 'edgy'. Good work!
     
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    definitely sounds like music for a videogame, still really nice tune though i like it, it reminds me of phantasy star online
     
  4. JeffJustice

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    My speakers are rubbish so I cant really pick up subs.

    I enjoyed listening to this. Definitely room for improvement in regards to blending it all together, chopping and changing bits to keep the listener interested.

    I know it's a 'minimal' style track but intermittent percussion would break the tune up well, like some bongos, or a subtle break sweeping in and out.

    Also, that hook line that comes in from when the tune gets going could use some processing. It comes across a bit loud over the mix and adding a little phase or chorus would keep it from being too repetitive.

    Keep it up