Giles - One Step Forward, Two Steps Back

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I really like the sub bass here. Personally, I feel like the melody and some of the sounds that come in are a bit...i dunno....cheesy? A bit like they could be from zelda or something haha. Just my opinion though.... The ideas good, just think you need to work on making it sound a bit more 'edgy'. Good work!
 
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My speakers are rubbish so I cant really pick up subs.

I enjoyed listening to this. Definitely room for improvement in regards to blending it all together, chopping and changing bits to keep the listener interested.

I know it's a 'minimal' style track but intermittent percussion would break the tune up well, like some bongos, or a subtle break sweeping in and out.

Also, that hook line that comes in from when the tune gets going could use some processing. It comes across a bit loud over the mix and adding a little phase or chorus would keep it from being too repetitive.

Keep it up
 
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