Intro is alright with the vocals, like that choir sound. On the drop I woulda changed it, gone techy for a bit and dropped the vocal. Save that for the intro/breakdown/outro. That synth sounds too stabby.
Got potential. Save the vocal as I said, go a bit harder on the drop, saturate the hell outta that shit, beef the drums a bit. P.O.T.E.N.T.I.A.L (ps: I'm pissed)
nice work, like this allot! the melody that comes in on the 1st drop detracts from the impact a bit imo, i like how it drops after the lil breakdown tho. I think your bass needs to be bigger aswell, to keep up with those awsome breaks over the top, and the energetic melodies, maybe sum (more) distortion wuld work