Ghost in the Shell Remix

Discussion in 'New Talent & Track Reviews' started by ChestOr, Sep 8, 2010.

  1. ChestOr

    ChestOr Member

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    Just started with this 3 hours ago, so its still in work.
    Anyway, I always need some Feedback within the working Process....

     
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    Intro is alright with the vocals, like that choir sound. On the drop I woulda changed it, gone techy for a bit and dropped the vocal. Save that for the intro/breakdown/outro. That synth sounds too stabby.

    Got potential. Save the vocal as I said, go a bit harder on the drop, saturate the hell outta that shit, beef the drums a bit. P.O.T.E.N.T.I.A.L (ps: I'm pissed)
     
  3. ChestOr

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    new Version in First post.
     
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    miszt BASSFACE Royale

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    nice work, like this allot! the melody that comes in on the 1st drop detracts from the impact a bit imo, i like how it drops after the lil breakdown tho. I think your bass needs to be bigger aswell, to keep up with those awsome breaks over the top, and the energetic melodies, maybe sum (more) distortion wuld work
     
  5. ChestOr

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    Thx, changed the Melody a little bit...new Version in first post

    €: something is wrong with Soundcloud, need to click on the direct link.
     
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