Gangster Rippin. (New DnB Project)

Discussion in 'New Talent & Track Reviews' started by DJNW1, Jan 8, 2011.

  1. DJNW1

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    At some points it feels like the vocals are being drowned out a bit by everything else, like around 2:40. Maybe pump the vocals up a wee bit or the subbass down a bit. Also some effects, like at 3:22, I found annoying instead of cool. Maybe just soften up the noise a bit? Other than that it was a cool track, not really my style, but I quite liked the vocals!
     
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    horace111 My name is Jago (HYQXYZ)

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    The idea is good but the drums are a bit too 'busy' for the rest of the track. You have this really smooth subbass , but you don't really hear it because of the drums and as said before the vocals are a bit drowned. Overall nice work though , Keep it up!
     
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    yeh sounds very full..sub doesnt seem very central, is it mono? n ur kick has too much tail imo..shorted it and it will help punch through.
    boost the vocals around 2khz or a lil high to add some brightness to it.
     
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    Kick and snare souding good. Hihats sounding like a big mess, i would change them.
    Vocals is dronwing in the rest of the elements.
    Nice sub but i think the bass is abit boring:)
    But ur onto something cool!
     
  6. DJNW1

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    thanks for the feed back guys. that was just day one. ill take all your opinions in to account when i get back to it on monday :)
     
  7. dar kist

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    i couldn't access that track, said it was unavailable
     
  8. Aeonikal

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    This, you taking it down to do more work on it?