Try turning all your volumes down and start to eq with your drums at 2q` around negative 10db. Also you need more symbols that are splashy. It could also help if you listen to your song side by side to a professional track you like to get the structure down a little better. Hope this helps.
Thanks for checking it out. I've already scrapped this thing though. Pretty sure it helped me get over 2 weeks of writers block though because I'm uploading something I'm "fairly" happy with as we speak.
I appreciate the drum EQ advice, it seems to be a trend in my songs and I hope this will take care of it