From the Top - ZeroZero (old skool jungle)

Discussion in 'New Talent & Track Reviews' started by barnesy00, Nov 14, 2010.

  1. barnesy00

    barnesy00 DJZeroZero

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    Jungle track, needs a few tweeks, looking for feedback! This is my first proper track only been producing about 3 or 4 months
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    barnesy00 DJZeroZero

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    any thoughts on this
     
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    not bad..pretty funky, but i think its too empty, needs some more percussion at different timings to give it a groove...or a bit of a shuffle
    try to vary it a lil, for me the different sections are way too long, but with some variation you can stretch it out.

    n i think ur snare could be a bit more punchy.

    nice piano melody though, sounds like a latino song.
     
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    logikz I Am Not The King Staff Member

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    this tune would work great as a bridge or a breakdown in an otherwise amen and think breaks dominated raga jungle tune.
     
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    barnesy00 DJZeroZero

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    how do you mean, make the track heavier and use the main part of this and a breakdown?
     
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    Ye pretty cool stuff man:)
     
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    barnesy00 DJZeroZero

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    gonna do some more work on this tonight i think could do with some more ideas before i do!
     
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    i mean as a song this doesnt do much for me. nothing much happens but its nice and jazzy so it would work great as an unrelated intro or breakdown in an otherwise amen and sub dominated raga jungle song. did you play the instrument yourself btw?
     
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    barnesy00 DJZeroZero

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    i see what you mean, im going to record another bassline in to switch it up a bit, add some sub bass and some more percussion try and make it more interesting and change a bit more becasue it is a bit samey all the way through as you said. i didnt pay it my mate did we are working together to make tracks hes more the musical side im more the technical side. cheers for the feedback man!