Frist ever production - WIP

[mdeezy]

tell me how good or bad it sounds, any tips are appreciated! i know some parts might seem awkward like the beginning but im working on it!

http://soundcloud.com/mdeezy/ultra

 

[drp81]

not bad for a first go, definitely needs some restructuring and an intro though! not feeling the lead later on but that's more down to personal taste. the beats feel like there's a lot missing, sounds like it's midway through dropping for quite a lot of the time imo, if you thicken up the breaks, add some structure and decide where you want the tune to go you'll be well away! once your first tune's out the way the door's open for loads more....