Friendly advice needed for a beginner.

Discussion in 'New Talent & Track Reviews' started by Darren, Apr 8, 2009.

  1. Darren

    Darren New Member

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    Hi, I downloaded Fruityloops yesterday and got used to all the buttons and began to make a track. I managed to get as far as an intro and didn't know where to go with it. I was hoping you could tell me if it sounds any good to you and where I can go on with it.

    http://www.yourfilelink.com/get.php?fid=492024
     
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  2. Sammy Dexcell

    Sammy Dexcell Stop editing my profile Smarty!

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    ok man u caught me in a good mood, im gona be friendly what advice do you need???
     
  3. Dave Dexcell

    Dave Dexcell Dexcell

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    ok.......... wheres the rest of it?
     
  4. safety

    safety double safety

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    you need bass, a better loop and some harmonies of the melody to begin with.
     
  5. subprime

    subprime Dysjoint

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    Man, If my eyes ain't decieving me you're 16, you downloaded fruityloops yesterday and you've been sweating blood over the mix for about....oh...a day.
    Mate, listen to some of the posts on here, read some tutorials, practise. That's how it works in general.