Drum & Bass Fresh tune need a feedback!

thats a tune i am working on. looking for some feedback thanx in advance!

 

just keep going with what your doing is my opinion, its sounds good! maybe a bit more low

 

THANX!!! i havent mixed it to my monitors yet. i will once i finixh with the arangment

 

Heavy biz man, sounds like you have a good idea of what you want to do.

 

Not bad i think it is qute low in volume,and maybe less compression on snare fix that and you got awesome banger good work!!

 

Yeah bring the kick n snare up, maybe add a clap or white noize to the snare for Xtra slap action, build more sections and away you go!!!

 

i am going to mix it from the begining. but guys i have a question. comparing to other tracks from the industry my sound is not fat. it seems like the sound is weak. abt ideas on that? is it because of mastering?