Not bad i think it is qute low in volume,and maybe less compression on snare fix that and you got awesome banger good work!!
Yeah bring the kick n snare up, maybe add a clap or white noize to the snare for Xtra slap action, build more sections and away you go!!!
i am going to mix it from the begining. but guys i have a question. comparing to other tracks from the industry my sound is not fat. it seems like the sound is weak. abt ideas on that? is it because of mastering?