Freemind - Its Not Right (drum&bass)

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  1. FreemindEstonia

    FreemindEstonia KICK ¤ SNARE ¤ BASS

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    There's my newśt tune. Check it out , and give feedback. Thanks :)!!
     
  2. Mr Fletch

    Mr Fletch aka KRONIX

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    Solid drumwork in the intro mate, vocal sounds a little off key from the synth though. Nice ideas once it drops but needs a little work on the mixdown, your kicks and basses are clashing a bit.

    Also, for future reference, theres a sub forum here at the top of the 1st page called "New talent and track reviews". Post all your tracks in there for feedback, you'll get a much better response
     
  3. FreemindEstonia

    FreemindEstonia KICK ¤ SNARE ¤ BASS

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    Thanks for that comment ;)
     
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    Nice work mate. Chill vocals, smooth bass. But the break is not really how i would do it, but it's a nice track! Also love that synth noise kicking in at 1:20 :).
     
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    FreemindEstonia KICK ¤ SNARE ¤ BASS

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    Swweeett chords man, lovin the intro! was dissapointed by the weak drums and simple plain bass sound, and random synth coming in later tho:/
     
  7. Capsika

    Capsika Liquid Roller

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    i agree with the above, the intro is solid as fook but there are a lot of odd pitching problems throughout, and the break is a little to snippy, like a thousand hairdressers on crack. it'd work much better with a more organic break i think. i definitely like where you're going with it though! :)
     
  8. FreemindEstonia

    FreemindEstonia KICK ¤ SNARE ¤ BASS

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    thanks guys, I learn and respect your teachings. :) Tryng to better next time :).