DnB FraZzeRed - Wraithstorm [Liquid DnB]

[FraZzeRed]

Hello folks
I've started making music some weeks ago and would love to have some feedback according to my track.
So hope you enjoy it. You can also check out my other track called Clockwork if you like to.

https://soundcloud.com/https%3A%2F%2Fsoundcloud.com%2Ffrazzered%2Fwraithstorm

 

[LVB]

If I were you, I'd search new drums, more natural sounding hats, better snares...
and get reading a bit about EQ'ing and mixing overall

On the postive hand! :

You have very nice melodies, you have great potential if you get more into the technical aspect of things
cause your strings are great!

keeping in mind you've only been producing for a few weeks, great work! you'll get there!

 

[FraZzeRed]

I've bought myself some beginner monitoring system and will start with EQ'ing and mixing now! They should arrive in a couple of days.
I've produced on shitty headphones ^^
I will follow your advice and try to choose better drums !
Thanks for your reply