Either I don't like the snare that much, or it has a little bit too much tail. Either way I think the snare could use some tweaking. The kick could use a wee boost as well as the subbass imo. 2:23-3:04, that weird sound that sounds out of tune sounds awful though. I think I could kinda see where you were going with it, but I really didn't like it. If you wanted some sort of morphing weird sound try putting a phaser/flanger on a new instrument or something. Other than that one part the tune was pretty nice.
hey man, this is cool style to do but your snare doesnt sound great to me.. it sounds flat, needs to have a strong attack to make the snare harder sounding. there are ways to do that with EQ and compression, but its better to start with a good sample