well drums need some fatteingness and i'd create a different sound in the main body of the tune but i think the melody is pretty catchy 'tis good and the intro's nice aswell very creative!
Add a break to your beats or get some better hits for your hi hats
um, go to www.breakbeatparadise.co.uk or something like that, download an old funk break and layer it over your drums, i can't go into much detail without knowing which software you use.
yea likin the vocal-nice build into a drop that wasnt that great-agreed your drumline could use a layer or two and might want to spread out the siren a bit-not much on the bassline-sound is ok but not mi thing-like the sweeping synth in the background though
all in all not bad tunage
Cheers guys, I haven't opened the .zip of this song since I posted it, I wanted to finish it and leave it tbh but now I'm craving a touch up.. I had a go at adding the vocals to the bassline and failed.. however, I think I'm gunna give it another go, gunna add some shuffly breaks to the background (been doing that on another tune atm) and yeah work with the vocals some more. What do you mean by "AHHHH TREBLE!!" btw? Is it the hi-hats do you reckon?