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Discussion in 'New Talent & Track Reviews' started by co0ke, May 16, 2010.

  1. co0ke

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    don't know what to think of this one now.
    was considering a vocal in there, possibly an emcee line or two.
    soundcloud added a couple of random glitches aswell which is annoying.
    anyhow let me know what you think
    much appreciated (y)

    http://soundcloud.com/co0ke/foe
     
  2. Neomind

    Neomind Too many skulls!">:O

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    nice ambient you've created with these pads and the subbass line ;)
    the drums have a really nice groove, but sound so repetitive. You could change the patterns here and there or each 4 bars (like fills and that stuff) to make it more interesting.
    Nice work overall
     
  3. luciduk

    luciduk Active Member

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    yeah... very interesting what youve done with the sort of sandy percusion sounds... love the delay-synth bits at 1.09 and 1.30... yeah this has a real nice clean sound to it
     
  4. richie_stix

    richie_stix gomby plz

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    hello mate, since you feedbacked my tracks i think it's only fair to do the same for you! although this kinda thing aint my style, i like what you have here... definately packed with potential. I quite liked the open, airy feel to this... made it kinda spooky! i personally would play on this idea and get it real eerie, with loadsa wicked little scary sounds thrown in... perhaps even try and use samples from a horror film as percussive elements?

    good things though... ;)
     
  5. subprime

    subprime Dysjoint

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    Really nice piece of ambience.
    Love the percussion. The samples dropped in here and there are great.
    Nice stuff
     
  6. co0ke

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    thanks for the feedback!
     
  7. logikz

    logikz I Am Not The King Staff Member

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    i like it, very chilled and spacey.
     
  8. co0ke

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    thanks man. im mostly concerned theres not enough happening to keep interest, but i didnt want to throw stuff in there just for the sake of it. glad you like it tho!