Drum & Bass Flokos - Sunset

Discussion in 'New Talent & Track Reviews' started by Flokos, Dec 31, 2011.

  1. Flokos

    Flokos New Member

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    Hello guys. This is my first post on this forum. Yesterday i finished my first track : .
    Its a chill liquid/intelligent dnb track and i would like some constructive feedback so i will get better. Im 15 years old so I still have a lot to learn. Thanks in advance :)

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    Cmon guys 60 views and not a single comment ?
     
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    hy, welcome to the forum. you should boost your drums. they are imo to quiet. i like the track. but you should really do another mixdown.
     
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    Yeah you are right. Thanks :D
     
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    Not bad tune is pretty solid,yes snare needs some boost,also i noticed that you hats sound kinda harsh try cutting 2,4,8 khz a bit to soften them a bit..
     
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    this sounds pretty good if it's your first track!
    mine sucked really hard compared to this xD

    It's already been said but I agree with the boosting of the drums.
    also try to make different drumbreaks for some more variation in the track.
     
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    Thanks all of you guys :D Seems that the drums/part of the drums was the main problem. I will keep in mind what you said for my next track :D