Fliwo - Skittles [WIP]

Discussion in 'New Talent & Track Reviews' started by wilf, Sep 28, 2010.

  1. wilf

    wilf Fliwo

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    Hey,

    Fliwo - Skittles (Work in Progress):
    http://soundcloud.com/wilf/skittles

    Really need a few other sets of ears to give me some feedback on this, one particular point im not happy with is the build up to the drop, similarly i feel the bit before that is a little bare and could do with a synth pattern of some sort (i've been working on something but haven't yet found the right sound)
    Only half the tune here but you get the idea!

    Many thanks in advance for any comments, absolutely everything is appreciated
    Cheers
     
  2. Cat Gas

    Cat Gas Aka Basis

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    The guitar was an interesting bit, adds alot of identity to the track I think.
    At 1.05 there was a louder kick drum or something, at first I thought it dropped but it mislead me, you should fix that up, it would make it harder to mix I think. But the main drop sounds fine, and the rest sounds alright to me, keep at it, it seems alright so far :)
     
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    nice vibe going on, but i thought the drums could be stronger personaly!
     
  4. wilf

    wilf Fliwo

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    Thanks for the comments,
    roadrunner: see what you mean, will try and take that out

    luciduk: when you say they could be stronger, do you mean they could sound stronger (harder kick, harder snare) or they should be stronger in terms of complexity etc.?