Fliwo - In The Rain

Discussion in 'New Talent & Track Reviews' started by wilf, Sep 22, 2012.

  1. wilf

    wilf Fliwo

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    New one, any comments much appreciated!

     
  2. pattycake

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    Grooves along nice i like it, can't think of much I'd change but i can hear in my mind everything dropping out for 10 seconds and some really strong bass comes in then its just the drums and this different bass(s).
     
  3. d-low

    d-low I know you got soul

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    great tune like the flow and this style of likwid is right up my street,


    gona give you a follow coz it sounds like you might come up gooood in the future :D
     
  4. oversight

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    nice drums and pads, this sounds very up my street

    vocal sample works really well

    build up is effective

    persoanally i would have kept the drums from the intro for the main bit of the tune

    a couple of those piano note dont sound like theyre sitting quite right.

    also not a massive fan of the higher wobbly bass that comes it, but thats personal preference

    this is very nice, i too will do a follow

    edit: oh i already am lol
     
  5. wilf

    wilf Fliwo

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    Thanks for taking the time to listen and comment! Much appreciated!
     
  6. neddez

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    the overall 'sound' of the track is good (i.e. your drums sound good, bassline sounds good etc)

    but i did think the arrangement was letting you down a little bit, everything sounds quantized to 4 bars yknow? a lil more movement esp in the b-line would have been cool

    and then maybe a nice lil piano twinkle thrown in somewhere with heaps of delay on it just as another sound
     
  7. wilf

    wilf Fliwo

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    When you say movement... how exactly do you mean? A slightly more 'slinky' bassline (i.e. not so quantised?)
     
  8. neddez

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    could be anything really

    not so quantised, off beat
    or perhaps a filter modulation or something of that nature
    a lil lfo doing something, just something else to bring to life a bit more
     
  9. Carbine

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    Pretty damn solid track dude. Mix wise it's excellent, everything is crystal clear and sits nicely. I think everything else has been said already, but I thought i deserved my first post! Oh and I followed.