fl studio drum n bass tune produced by me

[djklimaxx]

hi everyone my names will im 14,im kinda new to dnb fourum,im a drum n bass producer from essex,any tips on my tune would be great
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=MHynr-bmViw:rinsed:

 

[fisher]

sorry to break this to you but i think theres already some one by the name of Klimax who djs regularly in the southwest