Five Thirty AM- chill/harmonic dnb +/- comments encouraged!

Discussion in 'New Talent & Track Reviews' started by awfulmodel, May 17, 2011.

  1. awfulmodel

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    So this weekend I bought some new shit (reason5), well it's new to me, and this is what I came up with while trying to figure out the ins and outs. It sorta grew on me so I just went with it. As the title states, any positive and/or negative thoughts, please say something! thanks.


    http://soundcloud.com/user6056414/five-thirty-am
     
  2. ARTFX

    ARTFX www.artfx-studios.com

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    The atmospheric sounds are pretty cool, but the drums are way to repetitive. Work on the drums, add some more variation to them, and layer them up with some other drum samples maybe?
    Also there is no real structure in the tune, so you've gotta work on that, all the other sounds are pretty wicked!
     
  3. awfulmodel

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    Thx for checking it out. It ended up that I wanted it to sound chill but maybe I went about it the wrong way with the drum pattern. When I get home from slaving at my job ill break it up a bit I think. Levels are okay ya think?
     
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    I agree with artfx about the drums, I'd throw a few breaks in there to make it more interesting and im not sure if i dig the synth that comes @ 0:21 (kinda sounds like an old video game background music, but thats just me ;d). Everything else is ok imo.