Fishy - Winter Morning Wip

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  1. Fishy:)

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    Something i just started on:)
     
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    some tranquil pads at the beginning..very soothing.
    piano has a nice touch to it.

    drop was a bit sudden for me, especially since the intro is so laid back..main part is pretty good n liquid, for me you should watch ur velocities in ur snare when u do a double snare, because you want it sound natural. imo uve taken the velocity of the 2nd snare is too much down. (e.g. 1:10)

    bass sounds good and the drum sound kinda punchy, but i dont think this track needs very punchy and hard drums..so thats a good thing.
     
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    Ye man i know ita way too sudden, just put the idea out there gonna work more on it now:)
     
  4. wilf

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    That's real nice, the snare's a little weird but yeah... very chilled!
    Keep it updated!
     
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    updated alot:)
     
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    think it needs a lil more sub bass. the vibe is wicked as, love the piano work
     
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    Thanks dude:)
     
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    I love the delay on the piano, gives a bit of pace. Nice laid back tune, with pretty good drum variation too!

    Props man.