Fishy - Sun Rising From Within(unfinished wip)

[Fishy:)]

https://soundcloud.com/http%3A%2F%2Fsoundcloud.com%2Ffishy-1%2Fsun-rising-from-within-unfinished-wip
A prewiev of what im workin on for all u good people just started so no where near finished Chilled out jungle track for u would love some comments and the track will keep updating as i work on it as i got upgraded soundcloud wohoo

So ye comments please

 

[steeze]

Loving the chilled out vibes. The production seems pretty tight, all the levels are good. With more chilled out tracks the melody is really important, in your tune there's something funny about the second chord in the main melody, I'm guessing you kept it because that's how you wanted the track to sound but if it was me I may have changed it slightly. Nice stuff though, would definitely listen to it again

 

[Mrachniot]

nice chilled tune u got there dude, i like the piano melody. i like to hear it finished ... TSProject 1L

 

[Fishy:)]

thanks guys

 

[dj cluster]

imo track need some variation, i don't like synt in the last 1 min...with some work could be a good stuff

 

[duttymonster]

break a little thin and harsh pon the ear, but beautiful synth work and bass has a nice balanced EQ.

 

[Fishy:)]

thanks for the comments guys break is intended to be thin hehe
and ye theres no synth in the last min its just the bass hehe of ourse i will add more stuff and variation work in progress
track is probably gonna end up double of its current length