Fishy - Simple Inspiration wip

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  1. Fishy:)

    Fishy:) Active Member

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    a track i just started workin on yesterday:) real simple tune real chill
     
  2. GuiltyAsCharged

    GuiltyAsCharged New Member

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    Ok mate havent checked all of them but as i listenedi will post my thoughts on deep connection - i love the synth intro and the arp piano i think one of the key changes doesnt sound right but that maybe just my taste ! I think the drumz dont sound phat enough i would consider swapping the kick and snare for some better samples imo - as far as the pattern goes it is ok - i like the bass but think it is lacking some punch.

    Nice vibe ! Props
     
  3. chromey

    chromey a.k.a Impact

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    not bad fish man :)
    drums need layering, bussing and some sort of mix gel comp applying..
    liked the piano and strings.. very mellow :)
     
  4. Sid Fidla James

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    deffinately a chilled vibe with this one matey.
    personaly, with it being a chilled track i think he drums are ok. but i wouldn't mind a few more variations on the piano track.
    not bad stuff though man. keep it up :)
     
  5. Fishy:)

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    Ye i was going for simple drums on this one, no need to stuff everything like fuck hehe:) piano is gonna variate thru the whole track;)
     
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    nice one fishy...i would try n change to hi hat pattern to compliment the vibes a bit more tho...seems like a 'rushing' pattern when it should be a lil more of a 'slow roller' if yahgetme?
     
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    Fishy:) Active Member

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    Thanks man, I donno maybe, i kinda like it that way and might be abit empty without
     
  8. Protoplasym

    Protoplasym Nuskool

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    Don't take this the wrong way... but I wish this was what would play in an elevator. I would step onto the floor of my destination with some pep in my step after hearing this for 30+ seconds.


    :relaxed lil piece:
     
  9. Fishy:)

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    Dont really know what u mean with "pep in my step" but thanks man:)
     
  10. Protoplasym

    Protoplasym Nuskool

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    Pep in your step... you know, something to make you feel better about the day at that very moment...

    A positive interal push if you will : )))