Perc is nice for the Intro for sure... but at 1:02 I was truly expecting a new SD... something with some big smack in the Mid Range. Your current SD is really high pitched and I wish there was a meaty midrange layered on top for more middle smack. 2:09 is a perfect spot to introduce a Bell riff, or a Lead of some kind... something to compliment the 'raceyness' of your Hi Hat work (something frantic and constant). *edit* - I realize you've already got a pretty Bell and Piano thing going (and it's wonderful)... it's just that I want more Melody, lol... : ))) maybe I'm being greedy, hehe.
Overall, it's sounding Lush: I enjoyed the listen. Feels like it could have been fleshed out a lil more.. but if this is 4+ mins tops, then the Minimal approach works imo. My main complaint is with the SD, wish it had another layer.
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