First Tune - Liquid - Feedback Appreciated

Discussion in 'New Talent & Track Reviews' started by slcbeats, Nov 13, 2014.

  1. slcbeats

    slcbeats New Member

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    Hi all,
    This is my first tune created with Logic Pro 9. I used Lenzman's "Open Page" as a blueprint. Intending to feature female vocals on this as well.

    What are your thoughts?
    Big ups!

     
  2. blend107

    blend107 Active Member

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    Lush piano, very nice atmospheres going on. Can hear the influence.
    Transitions are also pretty nice.
    Drums a little weak in low frequency areas along with sub. Snares pretty nice though.
    Good effort mate, biggup :)
     
  3. slcbeats

    slcbeats New Member

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    Hey,
    Thanks for the feedback!
    I'll take a look at the lower end stuff. This definitely helps.
     
  4. dj mirry

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    Great effort mate, I love Lenzman's open letter track and really like this. Well done
     
  5. slcbeats

    slcbeats New Member

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    Big ups dj mirry!!
    Been working on blend107's feedback...completely on the money about the lower end stuff. I'll hopefully repost the tune soon. The sound of it is getting much better.
    Thanks again.
     
  6. slcbeats

    slcbeats New Member

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    Well, here is the tune with a new mix. Kicks are new, baseline is warmer, and overall sound is much better!!
    Thanks for all of your feedback.

     
  7. changerltd

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    musically this is great!

    look into drum layering to fill it out a bit imho theirs not enough going on in the drum department but thats just my 2 cents

    Striling effort tho the musical side of it sounds great!
     
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    Good music, still needs way more work on drums to make it a memorable piece of music.