First tune ever like!

Discussion in 'New Talent & Track Reviews' started by Jibba, Dec 11, 2004.

  1. Jibba

    Jibba Member

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    Any feedback would be much appreciated (but be kind ;) i'd only had Reason for 2 weeks when i'd made this)

    I'm well aware that I have no bassline in the tune lol...still haven't bladdy worked out how to make a sub yet :|

    Anyway here it is...

    Clinical Risk aka Jibba

    Cheers
     
  2. subwoofer

    subwoofer New Member

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    Makes me fall asleep man.. :jerkit:
     
  3. Jibba

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    Well thanks for that bit of constructive criticism.

    Always good to know how to improve basic production skills when you receive wonderful insights like that.

    Big up yourself Simon Cowell.
     
  4. sdm

    sdm This is Dog Fort

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    For a first tune, the drums are good IMO.

    The rest of the tune needs work, however try getting that funky bassline rolling in the background and that may pick it up.

    Nice work mang (y)
     
  5. Jibba

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    Cheers fella.

    Yeah, the missing bassline is the main thing I think.

    I'm strugglin to work out subs...got very frustrating so haven't picked up Reason in a while. May go back to this tune or start a fresh one.

    Thafe.