first tune by DJ fishy - charlie's angels (liquid)

Discussion in 'New Talent & Track Reviews' started by fishy, Aug 25, 2009.

  1. fishy

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    hey, i got reason in like may last year and i've fucked about on it a bit but i haven't had alot of spare time recently so this is basically all i've put together. it's not finished yet, only 2.16 so far, but you get the idea. also i don't have a midi keyboard so i've had to go through the bullshit of drawing everything on with my mouse.

    i've probably only played about with reason for 9 or 10 hours overall so i'm pretty proud with how this has turned out.

    i'd really appreciate some feedback/pointers etc so let me know what you think, cheers!
    stream http://soundcloud.com/dj-fishy/dj-fishy-charlies-angels-1
    download http://www.mediafire.com/?sharekey=3bdf1dfe060800e090a82c7bb0fad7ade04e75f6e8ebb871
     
  2. fishy

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  3. fishy

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    no?? dusssst??
     
  4. Dj Dirty Pimp

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    i dont really download tracks mate, put it on zshare.com or similar where i can stream it n ill give u feed back
     
  5. fishy

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    done! :jay:
     
  6. fishy

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    seriously? no-one?
     
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    Hi!

    First it don't sound too liquid to me but that's just a detail ;)
    then i'll say that i like your instruments and your drums (excepting the kind of rimshot entering @ 0:43)
    in fact i don't really like your harmonics ideas but the rest is really nice to me. I think your best harmonic idea between bass and lead is at the end.

    keep on going!
     
  8. fishy

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    cheers for the feedback man, yeah i'm not quite sure what happened on the drop, it just went kinda wonky for a second! i'm working on sorting it out.

    and i guess it's not your typical liquid but it's more liquid than jump up, i didn't really know what to classify it as. anyone else?
     
  9. fr00tyfr3sh

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    Wow listen to the tune, while watching the animation in dirty pimps avatar :S
    they match!!
    not bad for a first tune, but everything suonds like a builup without a drop.
    Keep making m m8!
     
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    cheers for the feedback guys, anyone else given this a listen?