First Tune, any feedback would be appreciated.

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  1. Yellaman

    Yellaman The Yellaman

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    Very good for a first track.
     
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    Yellaman The Yellaman

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    Safe, nice one man.
     
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    Nice sounds but not enough development. You could pad it out with some variation or a drop.
     
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    what do you mean mate by development man?
    the tune has got a drop.
     
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    Yellaman The Yellaman

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    My mistake...

    I just mean... different parts to it... But that's just my opinion it's hard to put what I mean into words.
     
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    yeayea, i understand what you mean.
    cheers for the feedback!
     
  9. vickvega

    vickvega Mr. Blonde

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    sounds good for a first track bro-keep at it
     
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    soundin good.. bit more variation and it would be spanking