First track!

Discussion in 'New Talent & Track Reviews' started by Drumbrain, Sep 30, 2009.

  1. Drumbrain

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    Lucidproduction i aint fraid of no ghosts

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    You see that right there,.........that's sense the man is speaking.
    Streaming for the win.
     
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    cool i really like ur sounds man! u got a load of buff sounds in there.
    BUT the mixdown is uterly terrible as far as my monitors are telling me it sounds messy.

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    try and give some feedback to other members if you actually want us to comment on your own tracks?

    its a give and take thing
     
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    The kick and snare are buried, it's quite muddy down there. That percussion was like chinese water torture by the end of the tune. Nothing wrong with it really, just change it around a bit. Stop it getting annoying.
    Good ideas tho. Keep at it.
     
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    this is a very cool track but the breakbeat is being pushed in and out by the synth i think... def need to eq the break to be in the top and compress that bass just a tad to let the kick through.
    besides the mixdown, this is a sweet tune, and with a little cleanup will be rockin.
     
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    Thanx for the comments!:) This is far from the good track,
    and comments were good to realise it. I´l thought to buy
    few good sample cd:s and remake this with top quality
    samples and take some time to make fine mixdown.
    I`am not really talented producer, but hard work is the
    way to me get some results:)