Drum & Bass First track

Discussion in 'New Talent & Track Reviews' started by roryobrien, Aug 1, 2013.

  1. roryobrien

    roryobrien Rory O'Brien

    Joined:
    Aug 1, 2013
    Messages:
    5
    Likes Received:
    0
    Location:
    UK
  2. LVB

    LVB Active Member

    Joined:
    Mar 3, 2013
    Messages:
    432
    Likes Received:
    56
    For a first track, this is pretty incredible!
    Maybe turn up the snare some more, cool vocal chops too, good work!
     
    roryobrien likes this.
  3. knh

    knh New Member

    Joined:
    Aug 2, 2013
    Messages:
    4
    Likes Received:
    0
    Nice job I say. Only thing I would edit is to drop out beat on break and leave the vocal with pads-atmos and melo alone with some swoosh or reverse crash and pause after it (that would bring some more tension to track).Anyway very brilliant job.
     
  4. Fatkidscantjump

    Fatkidscantjump Member

    Joined:
    Jun 3, 2012
    Messages:
    286
    Likes Received:
    20
    Really good job for a first track ! liked it
     
  5. Catsel

    Catsel Well-Known Dismember

    Joined:
    Jan 3, 2008
    Messages:
    16,332
    Likes Received:
    2,088
    great tune (y)
     
  6. Von Herzog

    Von Herzog Member

    Joined:
    Sep 9, 2012
    Messages:
    86
    Likes Received:
    14
    really nice track!

    i would take the drums away at 2:00