First track

[37H4N]

This is my first track, although it isn't finished. Please comment ect because there's lots to improve. Bad comments welcome haha. Thanks...

http://soundcloud.com/37h4n/uno

 

[omowglio]

to be 100% honest not my type of dnb. but for a first song u seem to of picked up how to use what is available to you quickly. if i were you ditch the bass ur using pickup a copy of massive, learn how to use that go through the subfocus tutorial on utube. it will be hard at first but u will benefit greatly. and get a hold of the vengance sample packs for drums etc

 

[PandaMindset]

Intro is a bit to long.. U should also add some more effects n shit.. And maybe as omowglio said, try to use the Massive vst.
Pretty good for a beginner thou!

 

[ARTFX]

Layer a subbass beneath the original bassline.
I don't hear any bass at all right now.