First track

Discussion in 'New Talent & Track Reviews' started by 37H4N, Sep 2, 2010.

  1. 37H4N

    37H4N Member

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    This is my first track, although it isn't finished. Please comment ect because there's lots to improve. Bad comments welcome haha. Thanks...

    http://soundcloud.com/37h4n/uno
     
  2. omowglio

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    to be 100% honest not my type of dnb. but for a first song u seem to of picked up how to use what is available to you quickly. if i were you ditch the bass ur using pickup a copy of massive, learn how to use that go through the subfocus tutorial on utube. it will be hard at first but u will benefit greatly. and get a hold of the vengance sample packs for drums etc
     
  3. PandaMindset

    PandaMindset Does not eat bamboo.

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    Intro is a bit to long.. U should also add some more effects n shit.. And maybe as omowglio said, try to use the Massive vst.
    Pretty good for a beginner thou!
     
  4. ARTFX

    ARTFX www.artfx-studios.com

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    Layer a subbass beneath the original bassline.
    I don't hear any bass at all right now.