First track! some feedback please?

Discussion in 'New Talent & Track Reviews' started by rooker, Feb 23, 2008.

  1. rooker

    rooker New Member

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    i finished my first song recently, just wanted to know how i can improve my songs and where i'm goin wrong cos i'm real new to production.
    http://www.myspace.com/01rooka
    any feedback would be great.
    cheers
     
  2. dar kist

    dar kist KYRO

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    alright mate, there so much to learn when u start out, i would say find article on eq ing and learn abit, then a bit about compression. i would give you some pointers but my keyboards broken and it takes me fucken ages to type. search www.dogsonacid.com they have loads of stuff to read. pretty good track for a first tune.
     
  3. rooker

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    cheers mate, i'll have a look
     
  4. Barnzee

    Barnzee OmniaInNumerisSitaSunt

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    I like the track man, i think the beggining is a bit long though, kinda repetitive and the skipping bit on the beat kinda pissed me off. I can sympathise with production issues like eq- its tough shit man, everyone here will help you though, im getting a lot of pointers to help me work on my sound. Pretty tight first track, bit quiet, but i like it man:) nice one(yn)
     
  5. Fratanize

    Fratanize Keepin the jungle alive

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    For your first track that was pretty good mate. When you start out you just wanna get something out there so you can get a gauge on how you are at making tunes initially. Nice effort with the bassline. Be careful with samples. There is a fine line between cool sounding and cheesy.
    Big up mate.
    Keep pluggin fella.
     
  6. exytage

    exytage EXYTAGE

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    pretty nice. drums should be a little bit louder. Maybe should bring more changes into bassline.
    I like it :respekt: