first track, pointers?

Discussion in 'New Talent & Track Reviews' started by EvezDroppin, Apr 28, 2009.

  1. EvezDroppin

    EvezDroppin how to change name,......

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    right guys this is my first track but more of a little sample so u can tell me straight away what needs doin and hopefully a point in the right direction? haha
    iv only bin on reason for a matter of days so atm its just a bit of fun but im so addicted already :mad:
    any comments much appreciated good bad or terrible i dont care! :)
     
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    Haha, you have like 24 seconds of silence at the end of the track. I was waiting for some big drop to flatten me, but no.
    Anyway. The drum arrangement sounded ok but they could be beefed up a little. And that synth that was only playing in my left ear pissed me off a bit.
    Not sure where the track was going, more like a doodle than a work of art. Not bad, but not great either.
    Keep it up.
     
  3. EvezDroppin

    EvezDroppin how to change name,......

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    hahahaha ye shit my bad.
    ye im a complete noob and now u mention it that synth thing is pissing me off too, i was gna do a big drop but I cant make dirty basslines at the min.
    thanks for checkin man!
     
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    am i the only one that cant work out megaupload codes :confused:
     
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    LOL, I always have to look twice. And then I get it wrong and have to try again. :rinsed:
     
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    interesting idea man, like it.
    think you could bring the bass up a bit?
    im hearing your drums are phasing at times aswell, make sure that u dont have two of the same sample hitting at exactly the same time... unless thats the sound u want...