First track , please give feedback.

Discussion in 'New Talent & Track Reviews' started by Kibon, Sep 20, 2008.

  1. Kibon

    Kibon Blaze It Down !

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  2. K motion

    K motion Rollin' deep

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    i like the dark bass noise, it reminds me of equinox off ram raiders 3
     
  3. Zeal

    Zeal Ohm/C2D/Dark Asylum/Ennex

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    Locked......

    Like the idea man, you kinda got that right, and layed it out kool

    You wanna keep layering up the drums to really fill them out

    best way for advice really would be to say, listen to a tune you have thats out by ur fav producer. And listen to that tune then yours, and listen to what you think it needs. And work on that :)

    hope this helps some mate
     
  4. Kibon

    Kibon Blaze It Down !

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    Cheers for the comments Kmotion and Zeal.
    And yeah I understand what you mean , gonna work on that. Thanks!
     
  5. Fratanize

    Fratanize Keepin the jungle alive

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    first thingz first, get a player mate. no one wants to have to wait a whole minute just to download your tune. you'll get a load more peeps reveiwing
    will listen tomoz mate, promise
     
  6. Viperdnb

    Viperdnb On his way.

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    I've got that dark sample thats in the start of the tune! :D
    Nice one you've got the basics down pretty much, learn to structure your tunes better and play about with layering drum sounds that are set at different frequencys.
     
  7. Kibon

    Kibon Blaze It Down !

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    Thanks for the comments I'll defenitly work on the drums , and to fratanize , you mean like on myspace ? 'caus I tried to do that but something went wrong , don't know why but I can't get them on my myspace.. I guess I'll have to work on that to :D
     
  8. freestyle

    freestyle I've been naughty, I'm banned

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    hello...

    nice idea man, i like the intro, i really like the idea of them beats, i just switched from stereo to mono and its like 2 different beats from each speaker:D

    i think this is the bassis for pottentially a very good track, from my experience on forums we all get a mixed response but if you work on a deep bass line for this to work with what you allready have i think most will like it, its kind of groovy man.

    peace.
     
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    Lihualee I've been naughty, I'm banned

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    Kibon Blaze It Down !

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    Thanks mate ! aight, I'll keep in mind what you said about the deep bassline.
     
  11. intafuze

    intafuze Member

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    woah this tune is crazy, well when ur as lean as me lol soundin sick bro
     
  12. Kibon

    Kibon Blaze It Down !

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    lol , thanks for the comments mate !
     
  13. DubC

    DubC Close your ears!

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    Love your ideas, the reece sound is really cool. After the long into I was waiting for a huge drop, perhaps make more a build up before the drops. Really good attempt for a first tune though. Big up!
     
  14. dj-dusty

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    overall....as its ur first tune... id say it was pretty good, my first track was pretty terrible lol but.... your drums are very weak, do you have a cdj, if you do then wack it on cd then mix it to your fav tunes and when you switch it from theres to yours you will see what everyone is talking about, you seriously need to layer those drums.
    good effort though mate, and nice one for posting, look forward to hearing your next peice.

    have a listen to my track yeh?

    http://www.dnbforum.com/showthread.php?t=54538

    -(Dusty)-
     
  15. Kibon

    Kibon Blaze It Down !

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    Thanks for the comments mate , but no I don't have a cdj . but I still understand what you mean , I'm gonna work on that !
     
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    Kibon Blaze It Down !

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    thanks mate , will try to make more of a build up .. gonna work on a total new version of this track with all the advice I got ..
     
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    good first tune, i think some one said after that intro was waiting for a big drop. nver really came. nice effort.
     
  18. Kibon

    Kibon Blaze It Down !

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    Thanks for the comment !