First track I've made in a long time!

Discussion in 'New Talent & Track Reviews' started by Gloxxy, Jul 29, 2014.

  1. Gloxxy

    Gloxxy I SNORT COAL

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    This is the first track I've made in a long while. Your constructive criticism is welcome!

     
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    Solid tune. It's got a great rolling vibe to it. That super low bass is ace too. Listening to it loud in Behringer cans and it's making the sides of my head vibrate and my eyes slightly fog over when it drops :)
     
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    Haha. Sweet. I super saturated that sub!
     
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    mr meh Well-Known Member

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    yeah solid tune mate

    could do with little edit every 16 bars imo, 32 bars is a bit much without a change :)
     
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    Makes me think of the bass from cockney thug (caspa remix) haha! Sounds pretty sick!
     
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    IV4 Currently a newt.

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    Get a hair cut, cut your fingernails and your attitude sucks. get a real job too.

    Solid track, but you could use some changes on the 16th bars. Little stuff to make more interesting.
     
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    Gloxxy I SNORT COAL

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    Haha. Thanks. I will heed yours and Meh's advice and work on some drum fills and filter sweeps/ risers for every 16.
     
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    Tight tune! But maybe the mid range bass could be a bit more fatter or different arranged. I think those straight basses only work out well in liquid :p
    Oh and i love the second drop, the way you brought in the bassline is pretty kewl

    Keep it up, good work
     
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    Thank man. Yeah I always thought the mid bass was a little thin/hollow and needed a bit more harmonics and presence. I'll give it a bash.
     
  10. MARKLAR

    MARKLAR International Tracksuit Salesman

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    nice work but agree with people about some more variation

    also that clappy snare seems slightly panned to the left?? maybe mono that

    bass is nice and warm and gotta love the jungle bird sample.:teeth: