for your first tune, impressive. dont really think a break is essential here.. definitely not 4 anyway.
what i will say is find yourself a better kick drum sample. the one you are using at the moment is too weak. Vengeance sample packs are great for 1 shot hits. dont go nuts on the layering - i tend to stick to 2 kicks - one for the 'meat' and one for the top end character. any more and youll just be stacking peaks and end up with phasing issues (EXTREMELY common with kick drum layering) and you will lose all the natural power of the kickdrum...then eq (ensure kick does not hit at same frequency as your bass, maybe slight boost at 3-5k to bring out the 'click' of the kickdrum.) compress to taste.
wouldnt hurt to lay down some hi hats to make your beat roll a bit more too. these days i tend to stay away from breaks (re: start of my post) and just write my own. you will learn much much quicker than just slapping someone else's drum break over your tune and hi passing it... not to mention, there will be loads of junk in there that'll just eat up headroom most of the time. be creative and have fun.
hope some of this advice helps. Youre off to a good start mate!