First time on Jump-Up DNB

Discussion in 'New Talent & Track Reviews' started by mykono5, Mar 21, 2013.

  1. mykono5

    mykono5 Aru R.

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    This is my first time on doing Jump-up after a long time making Liquid.
    Please give me feedback and tell me what I need to fix
    Thanks in return.
     
  2. Mr Fletch

    Mr Fletch aka KRONIX

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    Wasnt too sure when I heard the intro, but i like the drop. I reckon the lfo high end wobble after the initial womp should be an octave lower tho
     
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    NICE try, intro is too cheesy needs to be bit more angry sounding but the drops good mate keep tweeking it youl get there in the end what producers do you listen to at the mo
     
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    Most people I asked to listen to this told me about the intro, yes it's kinda weird ^^;
    I can't get the wobble an octave lower, it sounded kinda damaged if I do.

    Yeah well the intro's taken from traditional song so yeah it's too cheesy ^^; I did this track inspired by Levela & Dub Zero ^^;